Death, an original story by yours truly

Death, an original story by yours truly

Yay! Great job! The last part was funny.
*Applauds*

Spooky, yet epic.
Good job makes me wonder....
Mysterious, yet good at the same time. I like it !
How dramatic. How simple, yet epic. Your concept and story is inspiring. Death would be happy someone sees him the way you do.
Wow. This was a really great short story! My stories are nowhere near as good as this haha.
Love this kind of short story, and it proves that my writing skill is still below you XD
Lol (crash on his couch we all know where that is going...).Good story but it could be longer. It's interesting enough to write three pages or so, get your writing muscles some exercise!
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