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Patch of Gray: The Marine

I like the way you introduced your main character but why did he fire a shot if he new it would attract their attention? I also like the way you set up the virus to be distributed. The cat lovers never saw it coming. Good work keep it up.
I love it. I watched Highschool of the Dead in a single day just a few days ago and this is really similar to that (probably because zombie apocalypse >.<); was it influenced by HOTD? Either way, I really like it - your detail of the weapons, and the story gets off to a nice start here.

The infection 'had' spread, it is, though. It's all supposed to be in the past tense in stories, unless the thing is current. For example, 'he discovered that zombies eat brains,' is all right because they always do, but 'two days later, the zombies had eaten his brain.'
Batfreak
Batfreak
I actually wrote these stories a few years ago. Was inspired by the first series premiere of The Walking Dead. Sharing them again to gauge people's interest to determine if I should keep writing.
Dude, make this into a book. This is awesome!
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