Pokemon OR AS Special Demo review

Pokemon OR AS Special Demo review

great review :D
Lol, "your dad, Steven". Anyway, nice review. ;)
Good but a few mistakes.First they give you 2nd evolution of the starters.2) Steven is not the player's dad :P. 3)Its Glalie in NA and Steelix in JAP. 4) Its team Aqua :P .Anyway, Nice Job :thumbsup:
Steven isn't the player's dad in R/S/E/OR/AS.
Other than that, your review is relatively good, so I'll give it a 4/5
It's a very good review for a demo. There are some tiny snags in sentence continuity, but I think you'll get better if you keep writing :)
So why do you need to do a review of the demo when there are reviews of the full game?
SpikeTheHedgehog
SpikeTheHedgehog
Well, it's my first idea. And I don't have the full game yet. But I'll probably review HeartGold or White version next
I really think you hit the nail on the head with this review buddy. Good job.
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