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The Adventures Of Stickman #1 Part #1

I'm sorry for the late release, I've been pretty busy... so I apologize. Sorry, no smilies here, but maybe in the next installment... also, this was made just for fun! Now, enjoy part 1 of my creation!

NOTE: I changed quite a few things, so if you want to see the difference, head over to my sneak peak, located here: http://forum.3dspedia.com/blog/sneak-peak-of-the-adventures-of-stickman.2187/ Also, for your convenience, the quotes are in bold, so you can tell speaking from narrator.

EDIT: The second part is here! Hop into the link and see what's going down! http://forum.3dspedia.com/blog/the-adventures-of-stickman-1-part-2.2538/


THE ADVENTURES OF STICKMAN!!! #1



It was a peaceful day in the world of Stikland (its spelled that way on purpose), where stick figures live in harmony. The place had an excellent king, who cared for the place and its citizens, and helped one out when he/she need some. It was very peaceful there.


Until one day. That day, something that would threaten their entire existence happened to Stikland. A UFO (I don't mean an alien UFO, aka flying saucer, but a human spaceship) landed on Stikland. The stick people were not hurt, luckily, but the UFO held a team of this weird life form. One was tall, one was middle-sized, and one was the mastermind of them all. They were colored, they had a face and fingers, and they wore a weird suit (in other words, humans.)


The humans were an evil group called "Team Skeleth". The stick people were puzzled. What were they? Where did they come from? The humans spoke their language, and the leader one said: "Muahahahaha!! We have come to DESTROY your world! It is sooo useless! You are just 2D, 3D looks SOO much better! Your king is nice, real ones have servants, knights! Real worlds have WARS! Not all just peace! Take us to your leader, and we can have a word with him."


The stick people, scared to death, led them to their king. The mastermind of Team
Skeleth spoke to the king these words: "What kind of a king are you?! 2D? What a bad look! What if a huge war happens? Where are the knights? You have to have knights! Your land will easily perish! Plus, don't you have the feeling to always sit on your throne and never get up to eat or drink, but you need to? You need servants, they can get it for you! Sure, real worlds have peace, but not ALL the time!"


To answer this, the king said...

Sorry, time's up! You have the group name, Team Skeleth, what they plan to do, and their speech (well, what they said to the people AND the king.) One more thing... there will be a hero, and his name will be... look at the title! I hope you are hyped for the next part!

Goodbye, and happy Father's Day! :thumbsup: :stop:

Latest Comments

Neat idea, but the (hints) like that are very in the way and need to be subtle (aka, the story itself explains it without that. You are missing quotations in some parts, and some grammar needs some fixing. Other than that, very solid, 4/5
Legend of Zelda Stick Version confirmed?
EnderLord
EnderLord
idk XD i just made this up lol
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