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[Kakea]

I need help, seriously, I have been... kinda successful in my plans... but I need to know how much more effort I'd need to put into this: Here, is the series I'm working on, and I'd like to know EVERY PROBLEM in this, be as harsh as possible, I'm planning on presenting this everywhere!




Problems I KNOW about: Size (I DON'T have a graphics tablet, yet), unintelligible writing, color inconsistency (I wasn't going to use color, as it's a one shot, but couldn't resist using a little...) and leaving at a cliff hanger (It is a One shot as aforementioned, and I'd finish this in better look/style)

 

[Kakea]

 

[Dowhat?]

the text is kinda hard to read you could type. also you should try and make the lines straight. heres an examp,e of what i mean ( i didnt type tho)

 

[Kakea]

the text is kinda hard to read you could type. also you should try and make the lines straight. heres an examp,e of what i mean ( i didnt type tho)

How did you make this!? I want to make it bigger so I'll have more room to write, but I can't find anything on 3DS.
Is this possible on it? I could only make what I did via Pokemon Art Academy and 3DS Camera...

 

[Dowhat?]

im not sure, i dont draw on the 3ds, i use computer, however, if you use certain tools you can make it good with a mouse(disclaimer, i didnt)

 

[Kakea]

im not sure, i dont draw on the 3ds, i use computer, however, if you use certain tools you can make it good with a mouse(disclaimer, i didnt)

Shoot... I only have a tablet/touchscreen drawing (Which wouldn't be bad if I had a tablet stylus and/or a Graphics Tablet...) I REALLY need something that'll at least help with typing/words. I can draw myself... kinda...

 

[Dowhat?]

You could just edit them on ms paint

 

[Kakea]

Alright I'll look at it, hopefully this...

Will look decent with text all over it...