CreepyPasta Corner~

CreepyPasta Corner~

Hehe, I'm back to give you some more :sneaky: Get your body ready for goosebumps. This time I'll give you two!

Empty Streets
A girl had just alighted from the train and was coming out of the subway. It was raining heavily outside so she hurriedly took out her umbrella. She noticed that the huge crowd walking along the avenue with her were not wearing any sort of rain gear or even an umbrella. She had a hard time getting through as she had to avoid bumping into anyone.

A few minutes later, a taxi pulled over beside her, insisting that she get in. The driver seemed pretty insistent so she obeyed.

After they had left the avenue, the driver turned to look at her saying: “Well, when I saw you walking like you were tying to avoid bumping into anyone at an empty street, I figured I should lend a hand.”

The girl in the photograph
One school day, a boy named Tom was sitting in class and doing math. It was six more minutes until after school. As he was doing his homework, something caught his eye.

His desk was next to the window, and he turned and looked to the grass outside. It looked like a picture. When school was over, he ran to the spot where he saw it. He ran fast so that no one else could grab it.

He picked it up and smiled. It had a picture of the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. She had a dress with tights on and red shoes, and her hand was formed into a peace sign.

She was so beautiful he wanted to meet her, so he ran all over the school and asked everyone if they knew her or have ever seen her before. But everyone he asked said “No.” He was devastated.

When he was home, he asked his older sister if she knew the girl, but unfortunately she also said “No.” It was very late, so Tom walked up the stairs, placed the picture on his bedside table and went to sleep.

In the middle of the night Tom was awakened by a tap on his window. It was like a nail tapping. He got scared. After the tapping he heard a giggle. He saw a shadow near his window, so he got out of his bed, walked toward his window, opened it up and followed the giggling. By the time he reached it, it was gone.

The next day again he asked his neighbors if they knew her. Everybody said, “Sorry, no.” When his mother came home he even asked her if she knew her. She said “No.” He went to his room, placed the picture on his desk and fell asleep.

Once again he was awakened by a tapping. He took the picture and followed the giggling. He walked across the road, when suddenly he got hit by a car. He was dead with the picture in his hand.

The driver got out of the car and tried to help him, but it was too late. Suddenly he saw the picture and picked it up.

He saw a cute girl holding up three fingers.
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The first one was scarier, but in the second one, is she like a ghost who keeps track of her victims?
What would happen if she had more than 10 victims?
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
Time to use toes xD

Or grow more fingers o3o
I love the second one. One of the best short stories I've ever read :D

Here's my secondary ending to the first one, though:

The girl was watching the driver speak, and all of a sudden she noticed how sharp his teeth were... :D
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
Thank you for your feedback :3

And that sounds a bit to Cliché, dontcha think ^x^
The first one didn't scare me at all and the second one made me laugh for some reason :P
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
You are a weird one :p (not a bad thing)
I'll try to find more scary ones x)
I understand them both and they are awesome but the first one was lacking the scare factor the second one is way better though :)
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
And the second one was way longer x)
The first one always gave me goosebumps. .. xc
I don't understand the first one...
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
There were dead people she was "bumping" into.
She held up 3 fingers because a peace sign is 2, she killed him, so she holds up 3 fingers now. She killed 2 victims in the past.
Love these so far! and i got the 1st one but why did she hold up 3 fingers at the end of the second one?
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
If I remember correctly, she held up 2 fingers (peace sign) because she had killed 2 victims already, she held up 3 because he was the 3rd victim to die(or is going to die) from her x)
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