CreepyPasta Corner~

CreepyPasta Corner~

The first one was scarier, but in the second one, is she like a ghost who keeps track of her victims?
What would happen if she had more than 10 victims?
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
Time to use toes xD

Or grow more fingers o3o
I love the second one. One of the best short stories I've ever read :D

Here's my secondary ending to the first one, though:

The girl was watching the driver speak, and all of a sudden she noticed how sharp his teeth were... :D
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
Thank you for your feedback :3

And that sounds a bit to Cliché, dontcha think ^x^
The first one didn't scare me at all and the second one made me laugh for some reason :P
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
You are a weird one :p (not a bad thing)
I'll try to find more scary ones x)
I understand them both and they are awesome but the first one was lacking the scare factor the second one is way better though :)
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
And the second one was way longer x)
The first one always gave me goosebumps. .. xc
I don't understand the first one...
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
There were dead people she was "bumping" into.
She held up 3 fingers because a peace sign is 2, she killed him, so she holds up 3 fingers now. She killed 2 victims in the past.
Love these so far! and i got the 1st one but why did she hold up 3 fingers at the end of the second one?
JayRawrTiz
JayRawrTiz
If I remember correctly, she held up 2 fingers (peace sign) because she had killed 2 victims already, she held up 3 because he was the 3rd victim to die(or is going to die) from her x)
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