Makoto's Mansion - Chapter 1

Makoto's Mansion - Chapter 1

WARNING!!! THIS BLOG HAS MILDLY MATURE CONTENT!!! PLEASE EXIT THIS CHAPTER IF THAT OFFENDS YOU!!!

Makoto's Mansion
Chapter 1 - Entering Daisuke

.....suke? Da....su..e? .....DAISUKE!!!

"Holy Crap!" I bolted out of my bed at the command of the booming voice, only to see this:
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This is what I wake up to every, single morning. D-D-Don't get t-the wrong i-idea, we wern't doin' anything funny! Anyway, I should introduce myself... I'm Daisuke Aranishi, and her name is Shoko Tanagi. Her parents are away on business trips for their jobs sometimes so Tanagi-san stays with me and my mom, my dad...umm...passed.

"Ara-Chan, c'mon get up!" whined Shoko, as if she'd been waiting for me this entire time, which seems probably was because today we're meeting up with our friends for something important. " Okay, okay, I'm up. Happy?" "Put some clothes on, we have to go!" Shoko is usually ALOT cheerier, more days than most, but today she wasn't as cheerful. She was giving off this strange vibe, but I didn't want to pry...
"Where did they say we're meeting?" I said with more curiosity than I'm used to when I'm talking to her. "They said were meeting at the beginning of the stairs at..." Shoko paused at the end of her sentence. Once I saw the fear in her eyes, I knew exactly where we were going. " Daisouji Mansion?" Shoko seemed even more distressed that I knew what she has going to say. "Y-Yeah..." "I see you're still scared about going" "Yeah. Hey, you done yet?" "Yeah, let's go." And without hesitation, Shoko and I walked out the door...on our way to the possibly most scariest place...in the whole world.

End

Well, I think I did pretty good on the 1st chapter of the story. I bet most of you guys enjoyed looking at that picture:) (ya freaking perverts...) Anyway, thanks sooo much for reading!

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.06/10 not enough fan service
That's savage not even on the scale

(This refrence was made by an alphasad alphalad)
The fanservice level is too low. I have seen much worse, lol.
I liked the start of the story where the introduction was given, but as a chapter it is pretty vague, but I like the rising action at the end which many stories doesn't aim at very quickly.
Good job!
Frisk
Frisk
Thanks!
Short for a first chapter and actually more uneventful than the prologue, which is disappointing, but it set an anime theme for the story so yay.

And the picture. Heh. Even if it had to be put in a spoiler tag. >.> Be careful about that next time :P
Frisk
Frisk
Well, it starts out uneventful and boring, but I assure you, it's gonna get REAL interesting...
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