Makoto's Mansion - Chapter 1

.06/10 not enough fan service
That's savage not even on the scale

(This refrence was made by an alphasad alphalad)

The fanservice level is too low. I have seen much worse, lol.

I liked the start of the story where the introduction was given, but as a chapter it is pretty vague, but I like the rising action at the end which many stories doesn't aim at very quickly.
Good job!

Short for a first chapter and actually more uneventful than the prologue, which is disappointing, but it set an anime theme for the story so yay.

And the picture. Heh. Even if it had to be put in a spoiler tag. >.> Be careful about that next time :P