Makoto's Mansion: Prolouge

Makoto's Mansion: Prolouge

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Mizunil
interesting (it was awesome) can't wait to read chapter 1!!!
Frisk
Frisk
I've already got to chapter 2, and chapter 3 should be released today! Give it a read!
2
Now next feom Toxic Manor we have this mansion!

Ill wait for the first chap :)

Also is that image by any chance from Apollo Justice ace attorney?
Frisk
Frisk
I don't know... i'll have to look into it.
1
It's good \o/ A more interactive way of telling a story, eh?

The end could have done with being slightly slower - only slightly - and 'a while later' or something would have made the after-devouring sentence easier to get. Mailto could have done with some more explanation.

I sound nitpicky. It's a good start \o
Frisk
Frisk
Thank you so much! And it's "Makoto", not Malitio. There was kind of a typo on the name
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