hi, fairly new to this so be kind please and let me know if its any good.

[panthercat]

Unfortunately born on the eve of a new ice age.
Pax was the last of his kind shunned and forced to flee the safty of heaven for the madness that is earth.
Alone and unprotected Pax spent most of his childhood in hiding from the angels and demons that had birthed him.
The one bright spot in his otherwise bleak life was the human child Rose who found and took him in after a mind numbing game of hide and seek with his would be killers.
Any one who thinks this is a good story is welcome to join.

 

[SyNoMi]

It looks great so far but it raises a lot of questions. First, why is Pax running? Who is Rose and why did she take him in? And, what do you plan on covering in the RP, maybe clean up those areas and you'll definitely have a story going.