I'm writing a Zelda Story!

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Hi guys, I thought I'd share this with you.
I dug up an old story I wrote when I was young, and to this day I still love the concept I came up with, so I decided to start writing it again!!
It takes place in Ocarina of Time's universe, but way way after Ocarina of Time.
I know this doesn't make much sense in the timeline sense, since logically, I should just have it set in Majora's Mask.. But I honestly don't care about the timeline too much, and I wanted to do something in the world of Ocarina, but with the next generation of Zelda, Link and and others.

The story centers around a young girl named Sapphire who is half Zora, half Hylian.
She however, has no idea what she is. Her father has managed to keep the Zora's a secret from her, by instilling a fear of Lake Hylia into her.
She is constantly mocked and shunned by Hylians, and some of her only friends are Link and Princess Zelda, who also are forced to keep secrets from her, however, they have no idea why they have to keep it a secret from her, they only know that it's "for her own good".

Here's the link to the story.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8849084/1/The-Hidden-Sapphire

If you think you might like this, please feel free to have a look ^^
I'd appreciate it! Also, I love creative criticism.
 
Interesting plot so far, you've got held my attention on chapter one. Looking forward to reading more.
 
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Interesting plot so far, you've got held my attention on chapter one. Looking forward to reading more.
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Why thank you!
 
I definitely have to read this. If you need help with any game elements in your story I can help. It's good to see someone else doing what I do. Except in my story Link talks and he goes through the Ocarina of Time quest, but it has more depth and detail than the game. I really went all out!
 
Wow you really have imagination! Although you just thought of this, I think this could make a great plot for the series coming games. The main character's name and species is a good choice as it brings out more of the Zora people. Wish we coeld have more stories like these. Really cool! Keep it up!
 
This was great! you have a lot of imagination and story-writting skills, i usually dont read fanfiction because it creeps me out but this was actually a pretty cool story it could fit in the Zelda universe, it ha spotential so just keep writing stories like these ones my gr8 m8, Keep it up
 
Cool good luck with the rest of the story :D
 
This is a very interesting story! It's quite original and very well written as well ( and the grammar is pretty good too, as that's a big deal to me as it shows me how much effort you really put into your writing). If you decide to keep making stories, keep up the good work!
 
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