improvement

[am101]

So i showed you guys some of my drawings on my 3ds, but i didnt show you how i drew on paper. So i decided it would be a great opportunity to show one of my drawings in an improvement.

2014 before:

2015 after:


So did i improve a lot or not?

 

[3823]

You're a really good artist. I love how you shaded the eyes. c:
You've improved a lot. Especially the shading aspect. I thought you meant to compare it to your other thread for a second >.<

 

[Yukine]

Woah! Awesome improvement!
The bottom one looks more stylised and clean-cut ^^ You've learned not to press with a pencil too hard as well, so that's good :3

One tip; you can add more depth to your shading by using another colour that's close by on the colour wheel. For instance, under the girl's fringe there would be a shadow--I'd suggest using a colour like light brown for that ^^

 

[2071]

Wow Those are some really good quality drawings that you did . I like the details in the drawings . Not like I can do any better but I think that I like these ones more than the ones on the 3ds because usually using pencil to draw the results are usually better

These are cool

 

[2179]

Its improve alot but seriously we both gotta work on the body proportion imo >_<

 

[am101]

Woah! Awesome improvement!
The bottom one looks more stylised and clean-cut ^^ You've learned not to press with a pencil too hard as well, so that's good :3

One tip; you can add more depth to your shading by using another colour that's close by on the colour wheel. For instance, under the girl's fringe there would be a shadow--I'd suggest using a colour like light brown for that ^^

Thanks and I tried your tip and I have to say that she looks much better! ^-^

 

[archonei]

Definitely improved! You have talent as an artist and the best part is that you will improve more and more along the way, creating more wonderful artwork like this one c: Keep it up~

 

[am101]

Thanks everyone! ^-^