Kakea
Survivor
Towns Folk
I need help, seriously, I have been... kinda successful in my plans... but I need to know how much more effort I'd need to put into this: Here, is the series I'm working on, and I'd like to know EVERY PROBLEM in this, be as harsh as possible, I'm planning on presenting this everywhere!
Problems I KNOW about: Size (I DON'T have a graphics tablet, yet), unintelligible writing, color inconsistency (I wasn't going to use color, as it's a one shot, but couldn't resist using a little...) and leaving at a cliff hanger (It is a One shot as aforementioned, and I'd finish this in better look/style)
Problems I KNOW about: Size (I DON'T have a graphics tablet, yet), unintelligible writing, color inconsistency (I wasn't going to use color, as it's a one shot, but couldn't resist using a little...) and leaving at a cliff hanger (It is a One shot as aforementioned, and I'd finish this in better look/style)