RMT / Team Help Rate My Team

[Derpguy64]

So, I made a couple teams. One for OU, one for Ubers. I'll post my OU team first, and feel free to make suggestions.

420 Blaze It (Charizard) (M) @ Charizardite X
Ability: Blaze
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Flamethrower
- Air Slash
- SolarBeam
- Ancient Power

Land Shark (Garchomp) (M) @ Expert Belt
Ability: Rough Skin
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Earthquake
- Shadow Claw
- Dragon Claw
- Iron Head

Angry Joe (Metagross) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Clear Body
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature
- Meteor Mash
- Iron Defense
- Zen Headbutt
- Earthquake

Weed Man (Breloom) (M) @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Poison Heal
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Sunny Day
- Toxic
- Spore
- Giga Drain

Cake (Sylveon) (F) @ Wise Glasses
Ability: Cute Charm
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
- Moonblast
- Psyshock
- Shadow Ball
- Hyper Beam

Lava Cookies (Heatran) (M) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Flash Fire
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 124 Atk / 192 Def / 192 SpD
Brave Nature
- Earthquake
- Explosion
- Lava Plume
- Flash Cannon


Like I said, feel free to suggest, and my Ubers team will be coming soon.

 

[pato]

hey i liked your team but what if you put charizarite y because with the x probably you will have a disadvantage with dragon type

 

[3823]

Here is some things you can do to improve your team,

-Replace Garchomp's item with a Choice Band
-Replace Sylveon's item with leftovers
- Repace hyper beam with Wish/Protect/Heal bell

Looks good to me although I may be overlooking it. ;-;

 

[Hikki]

I'm sorry but your nicknames make me cry xP

Your teams needs a bulky

Charizard- All the wrong stats for Charizard X >.< Sunny Day for Breloom is bad, go with Drought Charizard Y

Charizard @ Charizardite X
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 144 HP / 252 Atk / 112 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Dragon Claw
- Fire Punch
- Roost

Garchomp- Outrage is prefered over Expert Belt Your team needs Stealth Rock for Charizard and others

Garchomp @ Life Orb
Ability: Rough Skin
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Draco Meteor
- Earthquake
- Fire Blast
- Stealth Rock

Metagross- No not good. Iron Defense is wrong and use Metagrossite for OU or don't use it at all.

Metagross @ Life Orb
Ability: Clear Body
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Agility
- Meteor Mash
- Earthquake
- Zen Headbutt

Breloom- Your set is good for doubles or VCG Use this suidcide lead

Breloom @ Focus Sash
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Spore
- Bullet Seed
- Mach Punch
- Rock Tomb

Sylveon- Everything is wrong >.<

Sylveon @ Leftovers
Ability: Pixilate
EVs: 252 HP / 220 Def / 36 SpD
Bold Nature
- Wish
- Heal Bell
- Protect
- Hyper Voice -ESSENTIAL! Pixelite=180 pwoer I believe

Heatran - Is not a suidcide explosion. It is more like bulky offensive or offensive sweeper

Heatran @ Choice Scarf
EVs: 28 HP / 252 SpA / 228 Spe
Timid Nature
- Fire Blast
- Flash Cannon
- Earth Power
- Ancient Power

 

[3905]

Cake (Sylveon) (F) @ Wise Glasses
Ability: Cute Charm
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
- Moonblast
- Psyshock
- Shadow Ball
- Hyper Beam

From the little I know about competitive I can tell you this Sylveon is not running a good set. Make the following changes:

Ability: Pixilate
Nature: Bold
Moveset: Replace Hyper Beam with Hyper Voice

There are many other things you could change up as well (probably the whole set itself) but these 3 elements are the basics of what I see as in a good sylveon set.

 

[Derpguy64]

thx for the suggestions so far

 

[Derpguy64]

I'll post my Ubers team after I get out of school

 

[Derpguy64]

Here's my Ubers team:

Mega Maxie (Groudon) @ Red Orb
Ability: Drought
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def
Adamant Nature
- Earthquake
- Dragon Claw
- Fire Punch
- Shadow Claw

Mega Archie (Kyogre) @ Blue Orb
Ability: Drizzle
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 SpD
Modest Nature
- Surf
- Ice Beam
- Signal Beam
- Thunderbolt

MLG Swagster (Mewtwo) @ Mewtwonite Y
Ability: Pressure
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Psystrike
- Shadow Ball
- Aura Sphere
- Energy Ball

Dragoon (Rayquaza) @ Expert Belt
Ability: Air Lock
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Ascent
- Aqua Tail
- Crunch
- Earthquake

Pure Bred Troll (Aegislash) (M) @ King's Rock
Ability: Stance Change
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 76 HP / 216 Def / 216 SpD
- King's Shield
- Night Slash
- Iron Head
- Hyper Beam

Gost (Darkrai) @ Quick Claw
Ability: Bad Dreams
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 128 Def / 128 SpD
Serious Nature
- Dark Void
- Nightmare
- Toxic
- Drain Punch

Looking at Darkrai I know Quick Claw isn't a good item choice, but I'm pretty confident about my team other than that.


Warning: Secret Team Approaching!

 

[Yveltal1]

On your first post, if your going for a championship team, I would replace heatran with tyranitar, earthquake,sandstorm,stealth rocks,and a final random move...