Contest Write a rap contest.

[AricAttack]

I made this with @Samster in mind,

so as none of you know, I do raps every now and then, and so I have a challenge for who can write the best one.

This will end on February 18th 12 Am PST

Rule:

1. cannot have any cursing, this is a family friendly forum, swearing won’t be tolerated.

2. Has to have some sort of story. You can’t just talk about nonsense just because it rhymes. E.g I won fun run yum.

3. This isn’t as important, but since this is a rap writing contest you have to at least try to rhyme if you can.

4. HAS TO BE ORIGINAL. anyone that doesn't follow this rule will be disqualified.

Prizes:

1st place: 100 PC

2nd place: 50 PC

3rd place: 25 PC

I’ll be judging these myself, ANNNND BEGGIN!

 

[Deepak]

does it HAVE to be a story. or can it be on a certain topic (like animal crossing tom nook?)

 

[AricAttack]

does it HAVE to be a story. or can it be on a certain topic (like animal crossing tom nook?)

yes, thats what i meant.

 

[Artisan]

How long you want to rap this for?

 

[AricAttack]

How long you want to rap this for?

Can be as long as you want it, but generally a shorter rap won’t have as much quality as a decent length one

 

[Kitsune_Sakura64]

*submits the DK Rap*

 

[Artisan]

Will the work of mine be good for thine?

Spoiler

Yo it's ya homie Artisan
I come from the land of American
made stuff like my keratin
Let me tell you a story
Of the reaper of artificial glory

You see I worked real hard but I always got stress
I was lucky to make it our of school I confess
And when I got in the real world bruh
I probably didn't make enough huh
But you see when I got internet fam
It's probably all I needed man

When I thought real hard on what I like
I sorta wanna be a Youtuber with the mic
With the competition I might mention
might make things full circle
I would feel so purple
So small but big in the mind
I need some advice

But you know what now I got the resources
To make the investment
To strive under this government
With the greatest of amendments
Got my virtual dough
And for real I've been saving up bro
I guess you know what they say

Get me a screen and watch me cast
I'll be more famous than that Pokemon's Ash
I'ma be more entertaining than your average gaming
Get me a channel and they will watch
It'll be real nice if I could be my own boss

Is this real? Only if you believe it
My life is still not pieces
My currency turns facetious
When turning PC into Reece's
Off an Amazon store sneetches

Drunk off a dream
Eating all the dank memes
Reading all the dark themes
Why get free stuff off Steam?

That's my take on the imperfect world
It exists but leaves you a zombie
The world will be your mommy
Your boy Arti.

 

[Jisenku]

A question, can the melody of the "rap" be actually some sort of slow and mellow song? Like it's just that I have no experience in writing a rap sort of thing, but I do like occasionally writing slower or extremely fast songs. I feel kinda stupid because it defeats the purpose of it being a rap... but I want to know just in case

 

[AricAttack]

A question, can the melody of the "rap" be actually some sort of slow and mellow song? Like it's just that I have no experience in writing a rap sort of thing, but I do like occasionally writing slower or extremely fast songs. I feel kinda stupid because it defeats the purpose of it being a rap... but I want to know just in case

It can be how you want it

 

[Jisenku]

Spoiler: Song?

Love is in the air
Love is everywhere
It's pretty cliche
But I'm not a kuudere

I'm loving love
And all that it is
I'm loving love
And that's all I am

Love is me, love is you
Love is the way you hold them like you were glue
Love is you, love is the world
Love is the thing that keeps us from feeling blue

Love is something, that can't be forgotten
Just like a flame that won't ever die
It's something that you share with your kin
Or people you don't know or why

Love isn't just romantic
It's erratic
It's something that pulls us together

Love isn't just a kiss
It's a promise
Of a future with me and you

Love is something that everyone has found
You just have to look around
Love is something that everyone can have
There may be nay-sayers but will get the last laugh
Sharing some love, while laughing about our past

As you can see, love is beautiful
It's the thing that gives us butterflies in our stomachs
There is only one rule, and that is to love

So next time you feel down
Just remember that no matter what
No matter the circumstance
Deep in my heart, I still love you

 

[Kitsune_Sakura64]

it's kinda short... >w<

Spoiler

Werewolves are cool
On you they might drool

Or howl at the moon
Then write magic runes

Sophisticated beasts
Upon you they do not feast

They simply cast a spell
And you join them as well

 

[Marc]

My entry:

Spoiler

I play games
But games don't play me
I saw a Switch
On T. V.
My wallet
Started to hate me
But guess what
I'll never 1-2-Switch my rap for you or for me

A note not part of entry: 1-2-Switch is a Switch game in case anyone forgot. I'll pretty sure lots of people forgot such an overpriced game was made a thing.

Word
/ @Artisan pulls up on a motorcycle and sprays me with bullets.

 

[Artisan]

My entry:

Spoiler

I play games
But games don't play me
I saw a Switch
On T. V.
My wallet
Started to hate me
But guess what
I'll never 1-2-Switch my rap for you or for me

A note not part of entry: 1-2-Switch is a Switch game in case anyone forgot. I'll pretty sure lots of people forgot such an overpriced game was made a thing.

Word
/ @Artisan pulls up on a motorcycle and sprays me with bullets.

I'ma gonna have to take your rap license until you give me an extended version whitey.

 

[AricAttack]

If anyone wants, after this contest is done, send me 1 pc and I'll rap it for you, and you tell me if you want a beat, or not.

 

[Deepak]

Not your typical animal crossing day: the rap


Ye ye ye ye
Ye ye ye ye

I be walking down da street (ye)
What do I see?(ye)
Tommy nook, Timmy nook staring at me (me)

I asked "watchu want"?
Didn't mean it as a taunt
I swear my voice was sweet
Like a freshly baked croissant

They adjusted their sweaters
They handed me a letter
I squinted my eyes
So that i could read it better

I couldn't believe it
My brain just split!
It said i stole their bells!
Man, what a hypocrite

My mind was confused
My heart was bruised
Cuz i really was innocent
Why am i accused?

Then i looked at their hands
My eyes expand
I saw something shiny
As the 2 brothers stand

It was a steel knife
This was becoming a strife
My heart was pounding
Cuz i valued my life

The knife was revealed
My fate was sealed
Why god why?
Im sorry! I yield!

Then i saw a smile
Longer than a mile
Right on their faces
It was worthwhile

They brought out a cake
I checked the date
Today was my birthday!
Same day as drake!

The letter was a joke
And i was such a bloke
We all had a laugh
Me and the townsfolk

I had a grand old time
Then i made this rap to rhyme
Today was exciting
Worth every dime

I woke up next morning(ye)
What do i see?(ye)
Mabel sis, Sable sis staring at me...................
(uh oh)

 

[Deepak]

moi animal crossing rap (sorta rap).

 

[Jisenku]

Not your typical animal crossing day: the rap


ye ye ye ye
ye ye ye ye

I be walking down da street (ye)
what do i see?(ye)
tommy nook, timmy nook staring at me (me)

i asked "watchu want"?
didn't mean it as a taunt
i swear my voice was sweet
like a freshly baked croissant

they adjusted their sweaters
they handed me a letter
i squinted my eyes
so that i could read it better

i couldn't believe it
my brain just split!
it said i stole their bells!
man, what a hypocrite

my mind was confused
my heart was bruised
cuz i really was innocent
why am i accused?

then i looked at their hands
my eyes expand
i saw something shiny
as the 2 brothers stand

it was a steel knife
this was a becoming a strife
my heart was pounding
cuz i valued my life

the knife was revealed
my fate was sealed
why god why?
im sorry! I yield!

then i saw a smile
longer than a mile
right on their faces
it was worthwile

they brought out a cake
i checked the date
today was my birthday!
same day as drake!

the letter was a joke
and i was such a bloke
we all had a laugh
me and the townsfolk

i had a grand old time
then i made this rap to rhyme
today was exciting
worth every dime

i woke up next morning(ye)
what do i see?(ye)
mabel sis, sable sis staring at me...................
(uh oh)

Besides no capitalization... this is　A M A Z I N G

 

[Deepak]

Besides no capitalization... this is　A M A Z I N G

fixed the capitalization and thanks!

 

[AricAttack]

FIRST PLACE 100 bells: @ddeeppaakkvv2121

SECOND PLACE 50 bells: @Artisan

THIRD PLACE 25 Bells: @BlueJ

Congrats, I'll be sending you your bells!

 

[Jisenku]

FIRST PLACE 100 bells: @ddeeppaakkvv2121

SECOND PLACE 50 bells: @Artisan

THIRD PLACE 25 Bells: @BlueJ

Congrats, I'll be sending you your bells!

yaaay! I actually thought that I wouldn't win something! At the same time I honestly thought that @ddeeppaakkvv2121 by a long shot. It was really well done and quite long in length.

@Artisan did quite well, using a varity of words in the simple ABAB format that was easy to follow along with. Probably could say the same with @ddeeppaakkvv2121's as well.

Overall, amazing job guys!