Death, an original story by yours truly

Lol (crash on his couch we all know where that is going...).Good story but it could be longer. It's interesting enough to write three pages or so, get your writing muscles some exercise!

Love this kind of short story, and it proves that my writing skill is still below you XD

Wow. This was a really great short story! My stories are nowhere near as good as this haha.

How dramatic. How simple, yet epic. Your concept and story is inspiring. Death would be happy someone sees him the way you do.

Mysterious, yet good at the same time. I like it !

Good job makes me wonder....

*Applauds*

Spooky, yet epic.

Yay! Great job! The last part was funny.