How I came to be who I am

Wow that was not what I was expecting when I started reading this... I'm glad I did though!

A sad dilemma, that is, a terrible father figure.

-1 for difficulty in reading.

Sad story, but i'm happy you're glad now I hope!
If you ever feel sad, us pedians will help! :3

Aww, that's a sad story ;(

Well, I'll be sure to visit you in jail if you meet your step-dad ;)

Wooooooooooah this is a huge wall of text, I can't really read it. Think you could separate the story into paragraphs?