Pit goes to Angel Boot Camp! (Pt.1/3)

OK then...

Boi wut is this. Basically wut everyone else said but wut is this

Mostly wat everyone said lol

What most people already said, and how was Medusa resurrected?

As others have said, needs paragraphs + fixing of grammar. I think you should make these stories longer, too.

Some grammar errors, no paragraphs and a story that doesn't interest me. Good work though.

It's meh and Pit is already a royal guard

Pit is already the captain of the Royal Guard, as well as savior of Skyworld multiple times, he wouldn't need boot camp. Also, there's some grammatical errors

Formatting and some grammatical errors but it's ok