Pokeumans: Chapter 1

CLIFF HANGER and I love it

It was a good read, but it was a little confusing.

So far, so good. The intimidate ability fail though when he showed the knife >< I guess you could say the exterminator had the clear body ability ;~;

A bit fast paced, but the concept of ware-Pokemon is interesting. (I also would've suggested a longer opening since this is your first chapter.) but it's still pretty good, you certainly have potential.

This is Interesting! ^-^
Part 2 pls!