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That one night.

One quiet night, the wind was howling and the thunder was roaring. And one
little 10 year old girl was sleeping in her cozy blue bed. But she couldn't sleep,
everything was too loud and she played Pokemon Super Mystery Dungeon for too long!
So the little girl went out her bed slowly walked out to get a drink of milk.
Her bagged eyes can barely see and her legs were still asleep.

But when she was walking to the fridge she saw her parents lying on the ground dead!
She can't believe she is seeing with her own eyes two people that she spent 10 years with dead.
And on the wall was blood. It looked like a sentence that she couldn't read properly.
She was astonished and afraid what was going to happen next.
She sprinted back to her bed tripping and hitting her head bleeding a little on the way back.
When she was back into her bedroom she jumped into her bed with her cover on top of her trying to forget everything and handling the bleed.

She woke up and went out cautiously. Her feet were cold and was afraid for her life and hoped it was a dream but it was not.
When she looked back at the blood on the wall, she knew what it said now.
It wrote "I know you're awake." The little girl felt breathing behind her neck and saw white after that.


And if you're wondering I wrote story to eradicate my current five star rating on my author page and if you're writing an essay on this for school, the
moral of the story is not to stay up late playing Pokemon Mystery Dungeon.
Author
Gary Johnson
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@Arcana, if the last thing she saw was all white then you know what her fate is.

This story has the brevity and pacing of a creepypasta, and I am not fond of creepypastas. (actually, I hate them.) it all seemed too quick and with no real direction. (also seems senseless) yes people kill people for no reason in real life, but when written for a story it doesn't fit well for me.
Gary Johnson
Gary Johnson
Huh, didn't think of that. Well I'll try to do better next time!
Well written,but "creepy cliche" ending
Gary Johnson
Gary Johnson
Heh, I can't write good endings.
Good, though its a bit unclear what happened to the girl at the end, maybe it's just me
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