That one night.

@Arcana, if the last thing she saw was all white then you know what her fate is.

This story has the brevity and pacing of a creepypasta, and I am not fond of creepypastas. (actually, I hate them.) it all seemed too quick and with no real direction. (also seems senseless) yes people kill people for no reason in real life, but when written for a story it doesn't fit well for me.

Well written,but "creepy cliche" ending

Good, though its a bit unclear what happened to the girl at the end, maybe it's just me