The Adventure of Link(and Zelda): Ep.3-The Magic Library!

Meh story, but im sure you can improve if you keep writing because practicing will make you better

Practice more it was to rushed and didn't really catch my interest as other fanfics do plus u need to take constructive criticism better <.<

I don't really get the point of the story, many things are very out of character and meaningless overall.

If people can buy an apprentice's spellbook and undo a spell cast by Ganondorf, of all people, what's the point of the Triforce? What was he doing on a grassland anyway?

How does Zelda even talk? Why would Ganondorf, the guy smart enough to sucker punch Link in Wind Waker, kidnap Zelda the second she showed herself in OoT, and earn the trust of the King of Hyrule in the same game, let Zelda, the bearer of the Triforce of Wisdom, talk while on dog form?

Talking. Dog.

A really quick, and kinda strange encounter with Gannon. Wh is Gannon in the middle of a grassland anyways? It was really short and overall not really that great...

Ending looks like it got cut off leaving in a bad cliffhanger and kinda seems like a generic fanfic.

Still too short.
too many typos.
not that good a story