This is too brief, dude, you haven't established what kind of adventure Link is on. And why show Ganondorf's perspective when the ambiguity of our foe would've worked so well? I'm sorry, I can't get into this. (But you do have potential.)
You're getting better, but when does this take place in the Zelda timeline? Because Ganondorf's first chronological appearance was Ocarina of Time and Fi was in Skyward Sword and never appeared again.