Why Mario is the real villain in Super Mario Bros.

Why Mario is the real villain in Super Mario Bros.

I swear if people don't stop making ridiculous stories. Pauline isn't with Mario, cheating isn't a crime, if Peach is in labor by Bowser you're either confirming that Mario, Bowser, or some 3rd party did something to her.
Errrrrrrrrrr. Wat happened
I wanted a graphic description of Peach giving birth
Henry 25313
Henry 25313
Well, too bad, I don't take requests!
Wat in the world.
What is this? Learn from your critism or you will never get better.
Henry 25313
Henry 25313
So, you come here and talk trash about my stories, the go and get 5 star ratings from your "Sad" blog post?
That's disgusting.
It's confirmed that Pauline is no linger dating Mario, so it's not because of that. Also, are you REAAAALLLLYY telling me that him trying to get a girl is worse than the implied Bowser rape or the kidnapping?
What even is this. You're really not that good at story-writing. You need to listen to the criticism or you're not gonna get better.
Henry 25313
Henry 25313
Yep, just tryna get glory from singing songs.
Dude, you can't just be rude to everyone who comments on your story. It's called opinions, everyone has one. and you don't be rude to them. You take their advice to try and improve your stories.
Henry 25313
Henry 25313
This is getting old....
Tied the former ruler to chair while sitting on *her throne* and say "I just want someone to spend time with" *while gag and blindfold her* just make Bowser look like a hopeless psychopaths.

Loneliness can't justify what he have done in this story, dude.
Henry 25313
Henry 25313
Still ignoring you.
Bowser kidnaps peach because he wants to rule the mushroom kingdom, but he cant because peach is already ruling. Pauline and Mario broke up and now are just friends. Mario is the true hero. All hail mario
Henry 25313
Henry 25313
Nice job ruining the whole point of the story! >:(
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