Much better than the last one.
Could have been a lot more impressive with a good beginning and presentation and punctuation, but a real improvement. Plus there are too many in-depth details where just an overview is required (e.g. colour coded arts) and the conclusion doesn't really come off well, with terms like 'from a reviewer's standpoint' and 'there were a few things I couldn't cover in this review,' but even so, this was a big step and you did decent \o Good luck with ones you do in the future
