Blog Critics

AS a artists I know what good critisism is i have seen no bad criticism on your stories they r just trying to help u. u just done want to listen to people's advice.

Hey. I know you're probably gonna not accept this. But your stories do have potential. Allot of people are pointing out stuff that could make it better. If you want to leave to smashboards, then whatever, go on ahead.

Ugh SmashBoard

Oh dear.... Not this again. You are misunderstanding something very important about criticism: its purpose is designed to help you improve, not intended to put you down. You are taking criticism far too personally, my friend. Its not a form of hatred, obnoxiousness, etc--none of that is why people criticise here. If people dont tell you what you did wrong or what you can improve on, how will you learn from your mistakes? One very important aspect of life is learning from error. If nobody learned from their wrongs, the whole world would literally be in an eternal war: people would go insane and do all kinds of bad things to each other thinking they are always right about everything.

Im not trying to flame you or hate you here in any way, im trying to help educate you here on the importance of criticism. But seeing how youve replied to the others here, i wont be surprised if you continue saying and thinking me and everyone else is out to make you mad, out to get you and make you as miserable as possible, etc..... I will leave the rest up to you, whether you think outside the box here or choose to retain the attitude you seem to have here. What i can do is try to help as im attempting to here. But like everyone else, i cant make the choice for you.

Well, nice job on your paragraphs. Better than last time.

On a more critical note I quote Jacksepticeye when I say this: "IRONY OVERDOSE! IRONY OVERDOSE!"

You rated 1 star on one of Pokefreak's blogs (For no apparent reason but spiteful revenge) and you're telling US to rate more fair? Buddy, if you think the Pedia is a hateful place, don't start a YouTube channel. Like ever.

You started the vicious cycle of hate when you got angry at us for giving you bad ratings. Quit blaming anyone else.


If you really want to improve (I'm not sure why no one recommended this yet) check out arguably some of the best story writers' storys on the pedia.

Makoto's Mansion

Toxic Manor

PersonSP's short storys.

(Lel, he's probably blocked me by now meaning he'll never see this review)

No m8, stay, I love your bad stories.

If it makes you feel better, I do get a kick out of your blogs.

What they said

Dude listen to criticism. We were trying to help when you began making stories. But you reject our advice to help you. We could've said your blogs were trash along with a "get out" but we saw potential in your stories. That is why we gave criticism. So please learn to accept it.

1 star for mentioning smash boards

We were giving you tips, not being a jerk to you. We were being critics. We knew what your story meant and we wanted to give advice and you didn't listen. All you really need to make your stories great are simply better grammar, paragraphs and stop using emotes.

Boy we don't care if you can't take criticism and opinions. Stop getting a horrible attitude when someone gives an opinion, it just shows how childish you are. Also, why would you be writing blogs at smash boards? They don't need poorly formatted blogs on smash boards. There is enough of that already

I was nice, i gave tips, i helped, but then you got salty and never listen, and you complained about everything! I give people 5 stars because theres has story, and i love them, but yours just get sexuel tbh...

I'm just gonna state my opinion on this and leave, if you can't handle criticism and people having different opinions from your own, please get off the internet. You are worse than me.

A few things

1.) stop complaining whenever people rate other blogs higher. Those blogs aren't on the same level as your blogs. They have their own issues that readers address. And most importantly, those authors tend to actually listen to their critism.

2.) Learn to take critism. I'm not saying this to be mean. I'm saying this because literally everyone has told you this and you refuse to listen. If you just accept the critism, your blogs would be much higher rated

3.) If you still can't learn to take critism, leave pedia. Leave the Internet, in fact. It's not a place where those who can't learn to fix their mistakes should be.

Hi there, I went and read through multiple of the feedbacks you reiceived (yes, it took me a long time) and from what I've seen, people started to give you really constructive comments and you ignored them completely. After repeating their comments over and over, you started being rude to them, but still ignored their comment and chose to do as you please.

Don't be jealous of someone else's success, it's not their fault and most of the time they listen to feedback. Please, try to spend more time on your stories, take into account the comments you receive. Don't take them personal, they are there to make you improve.

Throwing the blames on everyone else but you won't help you improve. If that many persons are giving you the same comments, don't you think it's because they might be true?

the reason u always have a bad rating on ur blogs is bcz u never actually listen to the criticism anyone gives u. by now, the only reason nobody's giving "nice criticism" is that you wouldn't listen to it when people were giving it in the first place.
just look at ur smash bros series for example: when u first started it u got a high rating on them, but then u started throwing stuff in that literally couldn't/shouldn't happen in smash (jigglypuff using random moves, way too cocky Corrin, little mac "fainting")
and in case u didn't know, criticism isn't really supposed to be nice anyway. actually good criticism would just straight up say "this could use some work, don't do this next time, etc". if all we did was say that everything was great, then you'd keep on making the same mistakes in all ur blogs and never learning anything from them.

TLDR: listen to the criticism u get, don't just throw random stuff into ur stories, "nice criticism" isn't the same as good criticism.

Almost all of us start out nice, I can even quote some of them if you want, until you went salty and tell that everyone is a bully. With evey blog, you worsen your own situation, acting like a spoiled brat. You don't want other to sugar-coat your stuff, yet you also don't want other to critic you, what the hell do you want then?

Go to whatever forum you wish I honestly do not care.

90% of the best critics arent nice i get you get bad comments but they are trying to help you. Even if they are bad you should take the advice. By the way: wat