Mario's Adventure Ep.2

Nice work

It's... better. Better grammer, and better story, but no emojis, plese >.< Also, paragraphs.... Please!

Just hit enter twice when some1 is speaking.

And plz, don't use emojis in story. Even folk at Fanfiction.net dont use them.

Greater than all of your past stories, this is your best story so far and you have improved grammar (which i don't use much but is important in writing) BUT PLEASE for the nest story USE PARAGRAPHS, this is just a wall of text but you are improving
AND PLEASE DONT USE EMOJIS

It's a bit better compared to your other stories. However, you shouldn't really use emojis in stories. Also, you need paragraphs.

Only thing wrong with this is Stuffwell is made by Professor E.Gadd, and I don't think he would make multiple of them.