Mario's Adventure Ep.2

Mario's Adventure Ep.2

Music:Playing the Game - Mario Party Music - YouTube
Luigi was waiting at the Toad shop when Mario came out with his hands full of a bunch of things. ":confused:Mario, are you sure we're going to need THAT much stuff?" Asked Luigi. ":DOf course!" Replied Mario. "If we're going to go on a big adventure, we're gonna need LOTS of stuff!" "But can't you cut down?" Asked Luigi. "This is a waste of money! And, besides, how much of it will fit in our pockets on the adventure?" ";)Relax, bro!" Said Mario. "I'm getting a Stuffwell!" He dropped the stuff he was already holding on the ground, and bolted back into the shop. While Mario was gone, Luigi scattered through the stuff. He saw Fire Flowers, Ice Flowers, Gold Flowers, a Metal Cap, Sponge Cake, Glazed Donuts, frosted cookies, Frozen Spaghetti, Microwaveable Crossiant Breakfast Sandwiches, and Super Mushrooms. "What's with all the food, Mario?" Luigi called out. Mario came out with a Stuffwell. ":DIf we're going to go on a big adventure, we're going to need the most energy we can get," Mario explained. Mario then put the stuff in the Stuffwell, went to the counter, dumped all the stuff on the counter, and said, "I'll take all this." "That will be 1,023 Coins," Said the Toadette clerk."WHAT?!!!:jawdrop:" Mario yelled. ":eek:I told you!" Said Luigi. "You can put some back if you would like to lower your price," said the clerk. Mario decided to pay instead, and they were ready to start the adventure.
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Nice work
It's... better. Better grammer, and better story, but no emojis, plese >.< Also, paragraphs.... Please!
Just hit enter twice when some1 is speaking.

And plz, don't use emojis in story. Even folk at Fanfiction.net dont use them.
Henry 25313
Henry 25313
What do I need from Fanfiction.net?
Greater than all of your past stories, this is your best story so far and you have improved grammar (which i don't use much but is important in writing) BUT PLEASE for the nest story USE PARAGRAPHS, this is just a wall of text but you are improving
AND PLEASE DONT USE EMOJIS
It's a bit better compared to your other stories. However, you shouldn't really use emojis in stories. Also, you need paragraphs.
Only thing wrong with this is Stuffwell is made by Professor E.Gadd, and I don't think he would make multiple of them.
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