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I looked at the original post and didn't see a entry fee!!!!!??? If there was I wouldn't enter, they don't give you pc for making posts on this site as they should and the prizes were just more pc!!!
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It's still there!!!? I thought I erased it yesterday! I'm sorry my tablet's so messed up it would "complete" a task then I could look for it and nothing has happened I'll delete it now sorry! :(
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Ok, now it's for real, it's ready; a whole game trilogy coming up:
STORIES OF THE AUSHA KINGDOM
Rating: E+10
Characters:
Al:
Gender: Male
Full name: Aleximus Herbares draconia II
Species: From the name it should be obvious, he is a Dragon
Description:
•Body Color: Mainly dark blue, with a bit of white for the horns and gold for the wings, has brown eyes.
•Clothes: red shirt, black pants, a golden pauldron on his left arm and a pair of golden Gauntlets.
•Personality: Serious, he doesn’t speak that much, but knows when to laugh and enjoy a few jokes, a bit lazy, but is generally willing to help, he is kind.
•Main weapons: Dual Swords
•Story: Al is the “normal” (he is the main character, and son of the leader of the dragon clan) type of young dragon, goes to the Ausha kingdom’s school, hangs around with his friends and likes playing games, secretly in love with his best friend Nahlin but won’t let her know about it, one day while exploring the outlands with her they found something that would change their lives.
Nahlin:
Gender: Female
Full Name: Nahlin Tyherian pyharis
Species: Bengal Tigress
Description:
•Body Color: White and black, has green eyes
•Clothes: purple blouse, brown pants, silver Faulds and gorget
•Personality: Smart, outgoing, loves to create machines, hard worker
•Main weapons: Small shield and a dagger
•Story: Nahlin is the daughter of a mechanic in the Ausha kingdom, she goes to the school and following her father’s steps she is the one who creates the new weapons for the army of the kingdom, she is Al’s best friend, and she knows he loves her, but she wants Al admit it; one day while exploring the outlands with him they found something that would change their lives.
Avelinkya:

Gender: Male
Species: God

Description: As the god of life he is the one who brings life and protects their souls when they die, he always shows himself as a anthropomorphic shaped light, he noble and caring, he arrived to an empty void one day and he found in this void an opportunity for a new beginning, as he could create lives he made ordeal and chaos and asked them to help him make a new world and keep it in balance.

Chaos:

Gender: Male

Species: God

Description: Son of Avelinkya, Chaos is the god of destruction, his main color is black and has rifts in his body that look like volcanic magma, he is the one who causes all the wars and destroys everything; the people got tired of him and sealed him away, sealing his sister too in the process, when the seal that held him broke, he was so angry against the ones who sealed him that he decided to destroy the world no matter what her sister or father said.

Ordeal:

Gender: Female

Species: Goddess

Description: Daughter of Avelinkya, Ordeal is the goddess of creation, her body is white, wears a white dress adorned with flowers, and sports a flower crown; she created everything by her father’s will and wisdom, and every time her brother destroys something, she creates something new to replace it; when the inhabitants of the world sealed her brother, she was sealed too in the process, when the seal that held her broke, she found his brother raging and talking about destroying the world, so she had to rely in some heroes to help her avoid this.

Xiel:

Gender: Male

Species: Dragon

Description:
•Body Color: Mainly dark red, with black horns and purple wings, has cyan eyes
•Clothes: He wears a copper armor, but refuses to cover his wings and his head except when battling with strong opponents
•He is mostly serious, he doesn’t know when to shut up, and he is very cruel.
•Main weapon: Giant sword
•Story: Ordeal had two heroes on her side, so he talked to his father telling him that the balance he asked for when creating the world demanded two allies for himself too, and thus Xiel and lyra were created from the reflections of Al and Nahlin respectively, he likes to tease Al.
Lyra:

Gender: Female

Species: Lioness

Description:
•Body color: Brown, she has red eyes.
•Clothes: As his partner Xiel she wears full body armor but she refuses to wear her helmet unless she fights against a strong opponent.
•Personality: Clumsy, Shy, hates technology, lazy
•Main weapon: Bow and arrow
•Story: Ordeal had two heroes on her side, so he talked to his father telling him that the balance he asked for when creating the world demanded two allies for himself too, and thus Xiel and lyra were created from the reflections of Al and Nahlin respectively, she has a tendency to trip over every stone in her way, poor thing.
Game description:
1.Consoles:
•Wii U
•New Nintendo 3DS
•Nintendo’s codename NX
•PC
2.Shaders:
•Realistic shader for first two games
•Cell shader for the third one
3.Game play:
•After the first dungeon (only in the first game, in the other two player will have this ability from the beginning) all playable characters are allowed to run fast, allowing for platforming puzzles and fast paced combat (uses a Run button).
•2 playable characters in the first game, 4 in the other 2 games, players can switch between them when they want, coop story mode, challenge mode available.
•Al has average attack, but his dual blades allow him to get combos easier.
•Nahlin, has short range attacks, so she relies a lot more in a defensive style of combat.
•Xiel’s great sword grants him a great attack power but his attacks are slower.
•Lyra is great for range combat, but her clumsiness is also part of the game play as certain times (30% chance) she will miss her attacks.
•Run button is used in combat for dodging, the character will move fast to the side, giving the chance for attacks.
•Items are obtained in dungeons and are necessary to progress through the game.
Story:

FIRST GAME: Stories of the Ausha kingdom: the rise of Chaos
This story begins with an ancient legend, one day while jumping through worlds Avelinkya found himself in a dark void, he decided to stay in this place as it was a chance for a new beginning, he could not make all he wanted by himself so he used a big amount of his power to create two beings, one was Ordeal, who had the power to materialize and create whatever came to her mind; the other one was Chaos, who enjoyed wrecking whatever was in his path, both were made to keep the world in balance, but Chaos enjoyed a LOT his work so he started destroying more than he was supposed to; wars, hatred, all were brought to the world because of him, but the inhabitants of the world got tired and spoke to Ordeal and Avelinkya about this problem, they couldn’t do anything by themselves, so they chose 4 heroes and gave them 4 weapons crafted by Ordeal’s own hands, and imbued in Avelinkya’s light, so the 4 heroes could go and seal Chaos, as getting rid of him would destroy the balance of the world, and so the heroes fought and triumphed, chaos was spread and sealed in two gems, but one last task was given to them, as chaos was sealed they should seal Ordeal too, so the world could finally find itself in balance, sad by the task they were given the heroes did as they were asked and just like Chaos ordeal was sealed in two gems.
5000 years after these events Aleximus Herbares draconia II, son of the leader of the dragon clan, woke up from a nightmare that had him standing in a small pillar with the whole world crumbling in front of his eyes, he just ignored it and went to the school, in the way he found her friend Nahlin, and both kept on their way to school, today was weapon practice, Aleximus, who we will cal Al from now on took two swords, Nahlin took a shield and the dagger she always carried with her, after the practice Al went with Nahlin to her home and Nahlin’s father asked them to go on and get him a rare material from a cave in the outlands of the kingdom, he gave them the necessary equipment as the outlands were filled with monsters; they went to the cave, in the cave after they found the material Nahlin’s father needed they decided to explore a bit deeper into the cave, they found a pair of golden swords, that Al took and kept for himself, but when he took the swords an earthquake caused 4 gems to fall from a wall, two were black, two were white, they were amazed, but suddenly the stones started attracting each other and to the surprise of the two heroes the seal that sealed both chaos and ordeal was broken revealing the two gods, the first one to awake was Chaos who angered for being sealed threatened the dragon and the tigress, al took his new swords and attacked Chaos, in pain chaos summoned a few creatures to help him, and when the creatures were about to attack Ordeal woke up and took the duo out of the cave, back in the kingdom ordeal introduces herself an explained the situation, asking the duo to help her seal his brother back, the heroes accepted the quest, she explained that they would need to gather back the stones that kept them sealed before, the problem was that the stones were sent to the four temples in the kingdom, one in the north, one in the east, one in the west and one in the south, she also told them they should be fast because if they weren’t the stones would disappear, after that she granted them both the power of running faster than anyone in the world, and so the heroes began their quest, first they went to the north, in the north temple they found a monster that could teleport, then in the south a monster that challenged them to a race, in the way to the west they found a village threatened by a beast, the heroes slain the beast and saved the people of the village. Back on their quest, when they finally had all the gems they went to seal Chaos, after a great battle the two heroes succeeded, and sealed Chaos but the story would not end there; because after sealing Chaos they saw two shadowy creatures running away from the place where chaos would be kept…


SECOND GAME: Stories of the Ausha kingdom: playing with reflections

This story does not begin after they sealed Chaos, but a bit before; Chaos seeing how her sister was closer every minute to seal him back with those two heroes realized that he needed help too, and so he went to talk to his father; he asked for two allies that could “help him keep the balance” as clearly Ordeal had an advantage with the two heroes; as he gave pair of gods the task to keep the balance and he knew Chaos would turn worse if he denied to the task he gave them, Avelinkya agreed to give him two allies and so from the reflection of Al and Nahlin, he brought two new beings to life and gave them to Chaos, yet still, he made sure that ordeal and her allies would still be able to win, Chaos gave these two new life forms names, the male one, who came from the reflection of Al would be named Xiel; the female one, created from Nahlin’s reflection would be named Lyra, and so he ordered them to await outside of the cave and awake him again when Ordeal got distracted; and watching how the heroes sealed him they went to prepare themselves to reawake their master.
After sealing Chaos our two heroes went back to their home, explaining their parents where they were was the first of their tasks, obviously the story was hard to believe so while the tiger clan did nothing to Nahlin for staying away from the kingdom for days, the dragon clan wasn’t so forgiving with Al, as they imprisoned him for three days and took his swords to the treasure room in the dragon’s castle; but while we wait for our hero to get out of the jail let’s focus our attention to the other duo, Xiel and Lyra; after the sealing of their master in the cave, they started to think where to start their practice, so they decided to become bounty hunters to gather experience, they already had weapons and armor provided by Chaos so this was a good plan to learn how to use them, a few quests to hunt monsters on the beach, the mountains, and the forest; and when they felt themselves ready they went to release Chaos, they waited until Ordeal was not paying attention and stole the gems that held him captive, they thought Chaos would be thankful for being released, but instead he started to accomplish his goal, he wanted to destroy the world and everything on it, that included both Xiel and Lyra, the duo just ran away fearing the fate that their master wanted for them, they went back to the Ausha kingdom but just after that Chaos showed himself floating at the top of Ausha kingdom’s church, “I will destroy this whole world that once denied me but I want to save this kingdom for the last so I can take my time to take revenge from those who imprisoned me, watching them suffer as I destroy what they try to protect.
Ordeal couldn’t believe it, Chaos was more powerful than he was before, and so she went to Ausha kingdom to ask again for the help of the heroes, Al and Nahlin accepted the task again but to their surprise the two shadowy characters they found in the cave where they sealed Chaos were there too, so they challenged the duo, who accepted the challenge, and so they fought Al vs. Xiel, and Nahlin vs. Lyra, of course the two original ones won, the loosing duo told them the truth and they wanted to help, reluctant Ordeal, Al and Nahlin accepted the help from the other two.
Ordeal sent Al and Nahlin to find the 4 sacred weapons that defeated chaos long ago, and sent Xiel and Lyra to find the gems because she needed to know why Chaos was more powerful, and she was certain she would find the answers there, Al and Nahlin had a hard time finding the weapons: bow and arrows were in an underground cave, a great sword was hidden under the water, a shield and a dagger were hidden in a castle over the clouds, all of those were guarded by monsters, but the one that was the most complicated were the dual swords as they were guarded by the dragon clan who had no interest in giving them to Al no matter if he was telling the truth, he was the son of their leader or if the world was about to end, so he had to sneak in the treasure room take them and escape.
Xiel and Lyra had to find the stones who were took by people who passed by after the duo released Chaos; they tracked them down and gathered them even if they needed to win a fighting tournament to get one of them.
At the end when the 4 heroes were back Ordeal found that chaos was more powerful because part of Avelinkya’s light from the weapons attached to him while he was inside of the gems.
Seeing as the end of the world was close Al decided to tell his secret to Nahlin, who told him that she already knew, and that she would like to talk more about it after they had saved the world.
They had no time to lose they had to seal Chaos, they found him fought him and sealed him for a third time, yet Al who fought the most with him was very injured so much that he slipped into a coma for a month. After Al woke up he found nothing was the way he expected it…

THIRD GAME: Stories of the Ausha kingdom: Of death and rebirth

After the whole month Al was in coma, he woke up but what he found was not to his liking; the world was already at the border of full destruction, “Chaos escaped from the seal using a bit of Avelinkya’s light” Ordeal told him, most people are dead, and the only thing left to this world is Ausha kingdom.
My father cannot do anything, the only thing I could do was to seal your friend in order to protect them but… Al, I lost so much that I’m dying, I have almost nothing left, I want to ask you one last thing Al, avenge this world; I shall grant you all I have left but please destroy Chaos, show him at least that you still have hope…
Ordeal gave him the four gems and told him that if everything was lost he should seal himself to at least get saved because the gems couldn’t be destroyed by Chaos, and after giving the dragon all his power Ordeal disappeared.
Enraged Al took his swords and went straight towards Chaos and with nothing left to lose he jumped straight to the battle, it was a fierce battle, and Al’s wrath was so great that he could use Ordeal’s energy to strike Chaos, and actually wound him.
Al won, yet Chaos was not completely gone, “he he he, you fought well, dragon it’s sad that this is the end for you and what’s left of this world” after saying that Chaos made a black hole that would end up engulfing everything; seeing this Al sealed himself in the fourth gem and from there he could see how what was left was destroyed.
Avelinkya then took the gems that contained the four heroes and spoke to Chaos: “do you think you won just because you destroyed everything, I am the one who can give life, so I know life more than anyone else, you know everything that dies comes back to me, but you forgot something, EVERYTHING HAS LIFE, maybe I can’t get back the world to the way it was but I can surely make the cycle start over; ordeal was a smart girl, she gave her energy to these four heroes, so using that I can create another world, only this time, I’ll make sure these four heroes defeat you”.
And so a flash of light coming from Avelinkya covered them.
Then Al woke up in a world like nothing he ever saw before, it looked like this new world was made out of small planetoids some connected by bridges others had water floating between them, it was beautiful, Avelinkya spoke to Al: “Oh hero from the past please hear me, you must awake your friends because the time for Chaos’ awakening is close and only if the four of you are together you can save this new world from him, I made a mistake, and I’m sorry for that so if you help me I will help you stop him once and for all.”; Al accepted this last quest and took his path to where Avelinkya told him to, releasing his friends, with all of them gathered Avelinkya sent them to get the powers of the four elements and so Al went for the fire, Nahlin for the water, lyra for the earth, and Xiel for the air; now with the elemental powers Avelinkya put them through a test to see if they were ready for what he would give them; after the four passed the test Avelinkya gave them a bit of his light, and so they went to defeat Chaos; a fierce battle then started, the heroes took turns to attack Chaos who countered them with all he had but the power of the four heroes was too great for him now and so they finally destroyed him.
Avelinkya then told them: “brave heroes you served me well, I will let you choose: you can stay with that power but you will come to me and only go to the world when you are needed or you could lose your power and keep on with your lives as I will make sure your family remembers you; Al and Nahlin decided to keep with their lives but promised Avelinkya that they would be available if he needed them, and Xiel and Lyra as they had no family chose to keep the power and help protect the world as long as Avelinkya allowed them to go visit Al and Nahlin each once in a while, and so the world was put to order again, yet there were still many adventures for this four heroes to live.
That was a really long but worthwhile read. So the whole plot revolves about this classical good/creation v.s. evil/destruction idea, but what I like about it is how you thought about the relations between the characters. Great job! :D :thumbsup:
 
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That was a really long but worthwhile read. So the whole plot revolves about this classical good/creation v.s. evil/destruction idea, but what I like about it is how you thought about the relations between the characters. Great job! :D :thumbsup:

this story was around my head for more or less 2 years, but i hadn't tought much about it, it actually was an idea i thought could fit well when rebooting a franchise, as sonic fan you might guess my original inspiration was around that, you can tell from the "look for the gems" parts of the story, but i started to get into Zelda lately and i realized the idea could also fit there, and when presented with this chance to tell this story to someone, i suddenly got inspired and started wondering where could i get without having to worry in keeping the characters from those two franchises, and decided to give it my own touch; i skipped a lot of details so it wouldn't be as long, but in the end i'm happy with what i got.

Thanks for reading, i'm glad you liked it!!
 
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this story was around my head for more or less 2 years, but i hadn't tought much about it, it actually was an idea i thought could fit well when rebooting a franchise, as sonic fan you might guess my original inspiration was around that, you can tell from the "look for the gems" parts of the story, but i started to get into Zelda lately and i realized the idea could also fit there, and when presented with this chance to tell this story to someone, i suddenly got inspired and started wondering where could i get without having to worry in keeping the characters from those two franchises, and decided to give it my own touch; i skipped a lot of details so it wouldn't be as long, but in the end i'm happy with what i got.

Thanks for reading, i'm glad you liked it!!
I played neither franchise but it sounds like it could be made into a game pretty well. I'd say, become a game developer and make it ;)
 
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I played neither franchise but it sounds like it could be made into a game pretty well. I'd say, become a game developer and make it ;)
You can be judge but just don't judge yourself unless I tell you to, I'm that cool ;3 honorary award for you and tyrone too.
 
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Any progress on the winners?
 
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Any progress on the winners?
We had a judge change to SpinnerWeb... so a delay will be had.... ALSO OMG 4:20PM 420 BLAZE IT MLG 0_0
 
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We had a judge change to SpinnerWeb... so a delay will be had.... ALSO OMG 4:20PM 420 BLAZE IT MLG 0_0
Hi, sorry if i bother you, but i really had to ask about this contest, i mean it has been a long time since i last heard something about it, is it still going or was there any problem?
 
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Hi, sorry if i bother you, but i really had to ask about this contest, i mean it has been a long time since i last heard something about it, is it still going or was there any problem?
I'm waiting for @TyroneTheNinja WINK WINK ITS YOUR TIME TO TELL US
 
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Hey @Teebz, I paid the entree fee and I don't see my name! :panda:
 
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May I still post my plot
 
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