Contest Poem In Your Pocket Day Poetry Contest!

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  • #61
The sun and water
supply us joy and sorrow
flowers bloom sky high​
It has a metaphor, try to guess it. c:
You don't have to read the spoiler, but it's a little complex, so I figured. .-.
The sun and water represent the sorrows and happiness in life, the seed/flower represents the human. A human needs to go through happy and sad experiences in life order grow strong as a human being.
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  • #62
Entry:

My Poem


Just a poem in a pocket

Sounds as simple as making a locket

Where should I start? What’s the goal?

Should it be about video games, maybe about the Super Bowl?

Now I’m wondering all these topics, and my poem needs to be done.

But no words have appeared on my page, not a single one.

It’s almost due, last second now, I need to think of something fast

I know! I’ll write about a journey in the past!

Which should I do that’s not been done before

I must do something creative to the core

Maybe mix in some free verse or haiku?

What to do, what to ah-ah-CHOO!

What’s this? A bolt of lightning struck the page?

Do I have super sneezing skills? Would others lock me in a cage?

Then fire spurts out of my mouth, and water from my hands

From underneath my feet, dirt rises though all the lands

This story’s long, let’s end it now, I need to actually think

About the topic of my newest poem. NO! It just went down the sink.
 
  • #63
Heres my one

Freddy stalks the place
His animatronic suit
looks very scary
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Entry:

My Poem


Just a poem in a pocket

Sounds as simple as making a locket

Where should I start? What’s the goal?

Should it be about video games, maybe about the Super Bowl?

Now I’m wondering all these topics, and my poem needs to be done.

But no words have appeared on my page, not a single one.

It’s almost due, last second now, I need to think of something fast

I know! I’ll write about a journey in the past!

Which should I do that’s not been done before

I must do something creative to the core

Maybe mix in some free verse or haiku?

What to do, what to ah-ah-CHOO!

What’s this? A bolt of lightning struck the page?

Do I have super sneezing skills? Would others lock me in a cage?

Then fire spurts out of my mouth, and water from my hands

From underneath my feet, dirt rises though all the lands

This story’s long, let’s end it now, I need to actually think

About the topic of my newest poem. NO! It just went down the sink.
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Added!
 
  • #64
I will join :p
 
  • #65
and another

Springtrap stalks the place
His rotting corpse in a suit
looks terrifying
 
  • #66
How do we enter?
 
  • #67
Here is my poem:

Our Link to the Past


Remember when you were a child?
Running free and wild
Day after day
On that N64 that you play
Collecting them rupees
With Navi the Fairy
Reuniting the Sages
To free the people from Ganondorf's many cages
And riding on the back of Epona
Trying to rescue princess Zelda
Then switching tasks and the game you play
Playing the ocarina and going to Dawn of the First Day
While finding the masks
To halt the moon's crash
Reuniting Tatl and Tael
Then they show that Skull kid is one nice male.
These great games
Created by a big cast
Gives us
Our "Link to the Past"
 
  • #68
I will join :p
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heres another so you can choose from my ones

Foxy stalks the place
His broken and warped suit
looks terrifying
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Added. Just a reminder while you can make multiple poems on 5/8/15 you will have to pick which one you want to enter. I do not pick it based on which I like better

How do we enter?
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All you have to do is create a poem and post it in the thread and your entered

Here is my poem:

Our Link to the Past


Remember when you were a child?
Running free and wild
Day after day
On that N64 that you play
Collecting them rupees
With Navi the Fairy
Reuniting the Sages
To free the people from Ganondorf's many cages
And riding on the back of Epona
Trying to rescue princess Zelda
Then switching tasks and the game you play
Playing the ocarina and going to Dawn of the First Day
While finding the masks
To halt the moon's crash
Reuniting Tatl and Tael
Then they show that Skull kid is one nice male.
These great games
Created by a big cast
Gives us
Our "Link to the Past"
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Added!

Is it too late to join? 'Cause I'd like to join, if it's still possible.
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Nope, added!
 
  • #69
  • #70
Sunshine.......,
it make me felt fine
at every morning at six
it stay focus and stay fix on my face
Till i wake up and
Start my beautiful day
With freshness of cold bath
Dazzling sunshine help to define
everyday so fine
Like it brightens up whole day
it also brightens also my way
At the end sun gets set
as the moon arrives
while remember me off my life
that i have to live it like this way only
So that i will
Always be like
This so smooth
And fine.........

thank you , and every one best of luck for this contest!!

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Ermm, no offence, but check your grammar
 
  • #71
Ermm, no offence, but check your grammar
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Oops ! !never noticed grammar while writing
 
  • #72
Oops ! !never noticed grammar while writing
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No worries, dude, just tryna help
 
  • #73
i believe Haiku is a japanese method of poetry, it restricts you to having a certain amount of syllables each line.
See?
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
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Oh ok thanks
 
  • #74
My Entry:

Welcome The Season of Spring:

The spring season
Is finally here
To make our days
Fresh and clear

What a beatiful day
For it to be May
May our precious flowers never decay


Say goodbye to Winter
Hello to spring
This season will guide you
From wing to wing
giving you all a wonderful light
That you will need to enjoy life.
 
  • #75
I'd like to join! My entry:
She stand in an empty room and all she can hear is rain
Little does she know that in her heart she felt pain
With every breathhe took she cried a little inside
She'd look at the window, rain pounding all night
The rain was subtle and slow but lashed out more than feist
Little did we know, the window is the soul of her eyes.... *and the rain.. was her tears. *
 
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  • #76
I'd like to join! My entry:
She stand in an empty room and all she can hear is rain
Little does she know that in her heart she felt pain
With every breathhe took she cried a little inside
She'd look at the window, rain pounding all night
The rain was subtle and slow but lashed out more than feist
Little did we know, the window is the soul of her eyes.... *and the rain.. was her tears. *
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I actually turned this into my teacher and got an A+ for it :p Of corse, this is not my submit, but hey, might as well show you how awesome my poetry is :p

A Some days it is just blank
B Most days I can just write
A But today, I just can’t make;
B This poem, have no might


A Today, I can not think
B Then, I just thought of it
A I had one in a blink
B It is lame I admit


A The boring, lame poem
B All about this one thing
A “Thing” isn’t an item
B But it just means nothing


A It is a superb thing
B Nothing isn’t nothing
A It isn’t just nothing;
B Cause it’s made by Jeffrey (My real name, and I kn0w this doesn't rhyme with "thing"
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Added both of you!
 
  • #77
Ooo I want to enter. Here's my Mario poem:

He's red
he's nice
and he eats mushrooms
just like
everyday
who is it
IT'S MARIO alright
He can take on
Koopas
Goombas
Boos
and even
Podoboos
so you better
watch out
he has the red flare
you would be scared
if he stares at your soul
MAR IO is COMING
TO THE
MUSHROOM KINGDOM
He's always nice
but doesn't play right
he knows what to do
when he's up to the time
he likes to shine
and he likes to line
up all of the friendly toads
into little froads
He's like Luig
Not like Waluigi
His rival is Wario
Which is not like Mario
If he's greedy
then he is deedy
This is why MAR IO IS COMING
TO THE
MUSHROOM KINGDOM. :D I hope you like it. It's a combination of some songs in poetry form.
 
  • #78
My official entry
A The funnest place of them all
B It is just a forum website
A Many love it overall
B Come on over it's quite fun
A Many peeps here loves great games
B Such games like Mario Kart
A Don't let them die, the great flames
B And strive games, your heart

A A place with no shame when lost to
B For this place, have many great hearts
A A place where we compete too
B And where many create art

A There is nothing much that's dark
B Everyone here is just great
A But I would like to thank @Marc
B For being an awesome mate
Hope you like it :p Sorry for the ABAB thing, was using it to help myself make the poem rhyme.
 
  • #79
My official entry
A The funnest place of them all
B It is just a forum website
A Many love it overall
B Come on over it's quite fun
A Many peeps here loves great games
B Such games like Mario Kart
A Don't let them die, the great flames
B And strive games, your heart

A A place with no shame when lost to
B For this place, have many great hearts
A A place where we compete too
B And where many create art

A There is nothing much that's dark
B Everyone here is just great
A But I would like to thank @Marc
B For being an awesome mate
Hope you like it :p Sorry for the ABAB thing, was using it to help myself make the poem rhyme.
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For some reason it won't let me have 1 same spoiler, sorry, they are one poem.
 
  • #80
I dont write poems. I wouldnt even dare. T he reason iI wont is that nobody cares. The last time tried was for someone i loved but now it feels as though i was shoved. Falling forever in my pit of dispare. When i tried to reach out nobody would care. That was than but this is now. I just dont know why or how. How did my heart get fixed so easily? And why does she even love me? I wish shed let me know. Maybe than our love could grow.

I dont write poems. I wouldnt even dare. T he reason iI wont is that nobody cares. The last time tried was for someone i loved but now it feels as though i was shoved. Falling forever in my pit of dispare. When i tried to reach out nobody would care. That was than but this is now. I just dont know why or how. How did my heart get fixed so easily? And why does she even love me? I wish shed let me know. Maybe than our love could grow.
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If it isnt too late or inappropriate this is my wreck of a poem.
 
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