I'll admit, it's a lot better. But there are questions that I have.
1. How come Samus crash lands convinently next to the castle?
2. How do Mario and Peach not know she crashed? Surely they had to know, rather than just answer the door.
3. She crashes near the mushroom kingdom. BUT SHE'S AT THE CASTLE! WHAT IS THIS LOGIC?????
4. Why is Samus such a douche to Mario?
1. Samus ran out of fuel, crashed near the Mushroom Kingdom, and went over to the castle(crashing far from the castle.)
2. They were in the castle doing whatever, which must have been louder than the noise from the crash(Remember that Samus crashed far from the castle.)
3. Samus goes over to the castle because she crashes far from it.
4. Mario laughs at Samus for expecting him to have a battery at the castle.