The Capsule: A Giantess Samus Story

The Capsule: A Giantess Samus Story

Samus had just crash landed near the Mushroom Kingdom. She knew what was wrong with the ship and how to fix it, but she also needed fuel for her ship to get back to her universe. She went over to Peach's Castle and knocked on the door. "Is anybody home?" Asked Samus.

Mario opened the door. "What do you-a need from us?" Mario asked. "I need some fuel for my ship to get back to my universe,"Samus replied. Mario suddenly burst into laughter. "WHO GETS FUEL FROM A CASTLE?"

Then Peach came to the door. Samus then pushed Mario into the moat and said, "I'd like some fuel for my ship." Then Peach said, "I have something for you after shrinking me in that Smash battle at Midgar." Peach took something she was hiding behind her back and gave it to Samus. "Hope you like staring," Peach said, walking back into the castle. It was in a battery, yes, but there was something telling Samus that this was not fuel.....

The liquid inside.....was purple! Fuel is green, not purple! The cap then came off, the liquid coming out like a dart, drenching Samus. She dropped the empty battery capsule. Then she heard rumbling. Suddenly she started growing as the rumbling continued. In less than ten seconds, she was, like twenty times her normal size!

"Now I can't even get back to my universe," Samus said, plucking her crashed ship out of the ground and looking at how its frontal damage. It seemed like a toy to her now. "I'm gonna need another way back," Samus said.

Then she looked at Toad Town. Everyone was staring at her. Nobody seemed to be scared of her, especially the male Toads, who found her alluring. The male Toads kept staring at her with hearts in their eyes. Now Samus had to run from a myraid of male Toads. Eventually they got her, and climbed all over her as Peach, who was watching, giggled.
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Henry 25313
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Good job.
Hey! this was actually great. Aside some little problems with it, its good and your best story yet
Sans and Pokefreak pointed out the majority of the issues. Definitely a turn for the better.
Everything is great about the story although it doesn't seem like it's finished. Great work.
Not that bad? I mean, you used paragraphs, the story is somewhat coherat but this story deserves a "WAT". Making it longer to flesh out the details could help.
Wat did I just read. 4/5 for paragraphs
Decent story I guess. Just fix formatting and make the characters more dynamic. All the characters seem really dynamic and the story just feels rushed to the climax.
um...what did i just read XD
I'll admit, it's a lot better. But there are questions that I have.

1. How come Samus crash lands convinently next to the castle?

2. How do Mario and Peach not know she crashed? Surely they had to know, rather than just answer the door.

3. She crashes near the mushroom kingdom. BUT SHE'S AT THE CASTLE! WHAT IS THIS LOGIC?????

4. Why is Samus such a douche to Mario?
Henry 25313
Henry 25313
I have answers to those questions.
1. Samus ran out of fuel, crashed near the Mushroom Kingdom, and went over to the castle(crashing far from the castle.)
2. They were in the castle doing whatever, which must have been louder than the noise from the crash(Remember that Samus crashed far from the castle.)
3. Samus goes over to the castle because she crashes far from it.
4. Mario laughs at Samus for expecting him to have a battery at the castle.
Clap.
a proper, decent story at last. Can't find fault with this one.
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